this blog is about Hailey's learning
+= I particularly love your display of work and what you learnt--}= You might need to work on like you said work on making your writing make senseso a helpful tip is to recheck your writing and fix any mistakes and maybe do a brainstorm first?
love the fish thing.next time check the spelling.
I like the way you used pic collage and made it colourfulTry to make the photo of your plan a bit bigger so we could read it easier
+= I particularly love your display of work and what you learnt
ReplyDelete--}= You might need to work on like you said work on making your writing make sense
so a helpful tip is to recheck your writing and fix any mistakes and maybe do a brainstorm first?
love the fish thing.
ReplyDeletenext time check the spelling.
I like the way you used pic collage and made it colourful
ReplyDeleteTry to make the photo of your plan a bit bigger so we could read it easier